Artist ~ Doogle
Song ~ "Electric Ultra Smart Vacuum Cleaner"
Date posted ~ 27-Feb
Link ~ http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=170788&T=6643
Judge ~ Jim Hoye
Score ~ 4.5
Comment ~ Comments - Beatlesque lyics up front - meaning of lyrics not clear because incomplete, (this
was a clip only not the full song) - hook doesn’t appear to be emphasized lyrically or musically
Judge ~ Paul Ward
Score ~ 8
Comment ~ simple, original, and very catchy, my personal favourite 8/10
Judge ~ Bobbio
Score ~ 4
Comment ~ Critique: Hard to take serious..a jingle, I guess..sorry I didn't get it...I'm sure I'm missing
something.
Judge ~ Tim Walton
Score ~ 6
Comment ~ I decided to finish my reviews based almost solely on the title of this ditty. Had to see what all
the buzz was about.I was 1/2 expecting a joke, but I was pleasantly surprised. good melody.
Bizzare, but captivating lyrics. A little too far out there for pop.
Judge ~ Mike
Score ~ 5
Comment ~ Nice short little ditty,good novelty song
Judge ~ Nancy G.
Score ~ 3
Comment ~ This song doesn't sound complete. I would like to hear a thicker sound. You have to appeal to
the listener. Average guitar sound. Average vocal production.
Vocals sound flat and thin sometimes. Work on the vocals and you could polish this into a
better song.
Judge ~ Hazelglow
Score ~ N/A
Comment ~ Sorry couldn’t make your song play; the acidplanet player just sits there looking at me no
matter how many different things I try to get it going. Loved your ‘photo’ though; I’d give you
an extra point just for that!
Judge ~ Todd
Score ~ 5
Comment ~ Critique: Slightly edgy Acoustic tune; not quite as edgy as say Violent Femmes or Annie De
Franco.
Engaging, but lyric is meandering and song itself is too short. Will check out some of your other
tunes when I get the time, as I like your unique style.
Judge ~ Melina/Christina
Score ~ 5-Jun
Comment ~ Critique: Cute goofy spoof on ad music. Why so short, prime time slots too pricey LOL? Can't
get the lyrics too well.
Judge ~ Alex
Score ~ 7.5
Comment ~ I liked this tune. To me, the witty lyrics and sound were not unlike what you would here from
Ween, They Might be Giants, and a little of Violent Femes. Voice went a little sharp and flat at
times. You almost sound like Billy Corgan of Smashing Pumpkins.