Jimmyz - "Wings of melody"

Posted by Geof on 3/14/2003, 1:43 pm, in reply to "Intra-forum Song Contest pt. II - Pop Songs"
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Artist ~ Jimmyz
Song ~ "Wings of melody"
Date posted ~ 26-Feb
Link ~ www.tonos.com/jimmers

Judge ~ Jim Hoye
Score ~ 6.5
Comment ~ Comment - pretty guitar work - nice folk sound - voice up front - chorus and verse distinct -
hook could be stronger by repetition outside of chorus

Judge ~ Bobbio
Score ~ 7
Comment ~ Critique: Nice guitar work..lyrics too simple..a bit long...


Judge ~ Iggy
Score ~ 6
Comment ~ Excellent guitar playing and above average vocals make this song better than what it really is.
The transition to the bridge was very good and complimented the song. I had difficulty
comprehending the songs lyrics and would not have known it's title.


Judge ~ Tim Walton
Score ~ 6
Comment ~ Beautiful intro. Joni Mitchell-like. The song is a little too touchy-feely for my personal taste.
Guitar work is first rate. I'm not sure I get the message offered up by the song. I know it's a
love song, but what's it all mean?


Judge ~ Nancy G.
Score ~ 9
Comment ~ Right away...striking guitar sound. I am a guitar
person. I want to know what strings you use and what brand guitar. Sounds "full". I find this
song comforting. You touched my heart. Great song
that sounds complete.

Judge ~ Melina/Christina
Score ~ 9
Comment ~ Critique: Nice intro, great guitar, sweet melody. Don't hold back the voice, project more with a
little more control. Nice lyrics but I couldn't get all. Seems great as a live performance act. Sort
of floksy. A little too long perhaps.