JLSC INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #3
CRITIQUES OF DOOGLE'S SONG
I NEVER SAW YOU AGAIN
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JUDGE |
RATING |
COMMENTS |
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01-Michael Spencer |
7.18 |
don't know if it's my computer or what, but i could barely hear this. What i could hear sounded pretty cool, kinda Lennon like, thats never bad |
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01-Paul Ward |
9 |
my favourite, simple, smooth, and compelling in a lo-fi sorta way, just moved me the way i like, nice one |
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03-David Tallent |
6.5 |
Volume extremely low, and all in left channel. Vocal "pops" in microphone. Nice strumming and singing though! |
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04-Nancy G. Brundrett |
5.5 |
As a listener, I found this song wanting. As we all know we are here to improve our sound and delivery. I would like to hear this one fuller and deeper. You have a great sound going here and the lyrics are good. I just needed a little more depth. This song would sound better if done fuller in a studio... |
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06-Jim Gietzen (JimmyZ) |
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Couldn't get it to play. |
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09-Mikhail Pesok (Sand) |
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Couldn’t play it, sorry. Impossible for a dial-up connection |
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10-Bobby Caputo (Bobbio) |
4.4 |
Words awkward...doesn't appear to be finished..took two minutes to get to the chorus and hook. |
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12-Markus Lorber |
3 |
Another unfinshed one. But after all, I can hear the song behind it! So keep on working on it. |
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14-Don Lyman |
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Couldn't get it to play. |
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15-Painter |
7 |
And I almost never heard it! Pretty song. When you record it agin the flow and sweetness will come out. Remember to open up your vocals a bit more and not hold them in your nose. Lots of potential here. Like the picture! |