JLSC INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #3

CRITIQUES OF DOOGLE'S SONG

I NEVER SAW YOU AGAIN

JUDGE

RATING

COMMENTS

01-Michael Spencer

7.18

don't know if it's my computer or what, but i could barely hear this. What i could hear sounded pretty cool, kinda Lennon like, thats never bad

01-Paul Ward

9

my favourite, simple, smooth, and compelling in a lo-fi sorta way, just moved me the way i like, nice one

03-David Tallent

6.5

Volume extremely low, and all in left channel. Vocal "pops" in microphone. Nice strumming and singing though!

04-Nancy G. Brundrett

5.5

As a listener, I found this song wanting. As we all know we are here to improve our sound and delivery. I would like to hear this one fuller and deeper. You have a great sound going here and the lyrics are good. I just needed a little more depth. This song would sound better if done fuller in a studio...

06-Jim Gietzen (JimmyZ)

 

Couldn't get it to play.

09-Mikhail Pesok (Sand)

 

Couldn’t play it, sorry. Impossible for a dial-up connection

10-Bobby Caputo (Bobbio)

4.4

Words awkward...doesn't appear to be finished..took two minutes to get to the chorus and hook.

12-Markus Lorber

3

Another unfinshed one. But after all, I can hear the song behind it! So keep on working on it.

14-Don Lyman

 

Couldn't get it to play.

15-Painter

7

And I almost never heard it! Pretty song. When you record it agin the flow and sweetness will come out. Remember to open up your vocals a bit more and not hold them in your nose. Lots of potential here. Like the picture!