JLSC INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #4

SONG CRITIQUES BY

DAVID TALLENT

 

ARTIST & SONG

RANK
on 11

RATING

COMMENTS

01-Lee Alexander
Someday

4

8

Really liked this song. Superb acoustic guitar work and good vocals. My only comment would be to bring the vocals slightly more up front.

02-Melina
Oedipus Rex

11

5

Well written and sang, just not my cup of tea. I am definitely not the best one to judge this song, as some of the traditional attributes don't apply here.

03-Joe Huettner
One More Mile

7

7

 Good song with excellent vocals. I would have liked a bridge or something that slowed down the pace awhile, then picked back up. Only major complaint is the percussion, I thought it sounded "canned", in particular the bass drum.

04-Mike Tricker
Lifetime of Love

6

7.5

Great piano playing, but the vocals got lost. Also hard for me to make distinction between verses and chorus.

05-David Tallent
Don't Run Away

 

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06-Alex Calvo
Anaconda

5

7.75

Really liked this one a lot. Great music, but vocals buried in the mix to the point of being almost undistinguishable. What I could hear of the voice sounded good. Constant pausing to buffer by Media Player made listening a challenge. I had to judge by putting the pieces together in my head.

07-Nancy G. Brundrett
Lost and Found

3

8.25

Really liked the lyrics on this one. Great guitar/mandy playing, but I would have liked a significant change-up somewhere in the song. Good vocals as well.

08-Don Lyman
I Am Here
(new song)

2

8.5

 Cool song. Lyrics memorable, without tangling the listener up in an epic story. Great voice and fantastic guitar work. Very well produced too. I did take half a point off, though, for reminding me of John Denver :-)

09-Robert Field
What She Said

10

6.5

Great voice, but too much reverb. Nice piano, too. I would like a mellow drum line added for emphasis.

10-Jeremy Haynes
Piety and Greed

1

8.75

As for lyrics, difficult subject handled very well. Singing was superb. Organ solo seemed out of place to me (you know us guitar guys, I'd rather have heard a good shread solo). A great number with much potential.

11-Joro
Chasing Sunsets

9

6.75

Good up-front vocals with good guitar picking. Mixed well, with good harmonies.

12-Hazelglow
Happy Just Being Here

8

6.9

Good voice, although some words got lost due to bad enumciation. Liked the song

 

 

08-Don Lyman
Just Words

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9

 Fantastic song! Although mp3 is garbled, I had the advantage of owning a copy of the CD. Wonderful guitar playing and great, expressive vocals. Killer lead guitar also. A winner! I feel sorry for others that don't have the luxury of having the CD, as I'm sure the garbled mp3 will annoy others and draw a lower score than this song deserves.