JLSC INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #4
SONG CRITIQUES BY
DAVID TALLENT
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ARTIST & SONG |
RANK |
RATING |
COMMENTS |
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01-Lee Alexander |
4 |
8 |
Really liked this song. Superb acoustic guitar work and good vocals. My only comment would be to bring the vocals slightly more up front. |
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02-Melina |
11 |
5 |
Well written and sang, just not my cup of tea. I am definitely not the best one to judge this song, as some of the traditional attributes don't apply here. |
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03-Joe Huettner |
7 |
7 |
Good song with excellent vocals. I would have liked a bridge or something that slowed down the pace awhile, then picked back up. Only major complaint is the percussion, I thought it sounded "canned", in particular the bass drum. |
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04-Mike Tricker |
6 |
7.5 |
Great piano playing, but the vocals got lost. Also hard for me to make distinction between verses and chorus. |
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06-Alex Calvo |
5 |
7.75 |
Really liked this one a lot. Great music, but vocals buried in the mix to the point of being almost undistinguishable. What I could hear of the voice sounded good. Constant pausing to buffer by Media Player made listening a challenge. I had to judge by putting the pieces together in my head. |
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07-Nancy G. Brundrett |
3 |
8.25 |
Really liked the lyrics on this one. Great guitar/mandy playing, but I would have liked a significant change-up somewhere in the song. Good vocals as well. |
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08-Don Lyman |
2 |
8.5 |
Cool song. Lyrics memorable, without tangling the listener up in an epic story. Great voice and fantastic guitar work. Very well produced too. I did take half a point off, though, for reminding me of John Denver :-) |
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09-Robert Field |
10 |
6.5 |
Great voice, but too much reverb. Nice piano, too. I would like a mellow drum line added for emphasis. |
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10-Jeremy Haynes |
1 |
8.75 |
As for lyrics, difficult subject handled very well. Singing was superb. Organ solo seemed out of place to me (you know us guitar guys, I'd rather have heard a good shread solo). A great number with much potential. |
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11-Joro |
9 |
6.75 |
Good up-front vocals with good guitar picking. Mixed well, with good harmonies. |
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12-Hazelglow |
8 |
6.9 |
Good voice, although some words got lost due to bad enumciation. Liked the song |
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08-Don Lyman UNUSED |
9 |
Fantastic song! Although mp3 is garbled, I had the advantage of owning a copy of the CD. Wonderful guitar playing and great, expressive vocals. Killer lead guitar also. A winner! I feel sorry for others that don't have the luxury of having the CD, as I'm sure the garbled mp3 will annoy others and draw a lower score than this song deserves. |