JLSC INTRA-FORUM CONTEST #4

CRITIQUES OF LEE ALEXANDER'S SONG

SOMEDAY

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JUDGE

RATING

COMMENTS

06-Alex Calvo

8

A like this song a lot. It grows on you the more you listen to it. The vocal mix should be more in front (a bit). It reminds me of Jimmy Buffet. Nice job. Great acoustic playing!

03-Joe Huettner

8.5

Excellent, EXCELLENT melody. The second verse is my favorite - excellent rhymes, excellent phrases, and the way it is sung makes it more of an impact on the listener. Great solo - possibly different chords for the solo section, to add a bit of change to the middle of the song. I think this song should win.

08-Don Lyman

8

Nice song. Good melody, nice chorus. Vocals sound very smooth. Good guitar work. The percussion sounds too far out front in the beginning of the song, but blends more into the mix as the song progresses

92-Bobbio

7.5

Good clean sound....not much distinction between the verses and the chorus, but overall nicely done...very pleasant.

10-Jeremy Haynes

8.5

Great vocal melody and guitar playing. Infectious hook that grows on you more and more with each spin.

09-Robert Field

6.5

Nice vocals, the guitar work was exceptional although I thought it sounded like there was too much treble. Also felt the rythme to be a little annoying but as it played on it got easier to listen to. Good luck.

05-David Tallent

8

Really liked this song. Superb acoustic guitar work and good vocals. My only comment would be to bring the vocals slightly more up front.

11-Joro

8

Super cool tunage man...real singer/songwriter stuff...

excellent lyric and performance....
Harmony vox is subtle...but, that's the way it should be...
You obviously know what you are doing...

Let me know if you want a bass line...I would be glad to do it....very cool indeed...

04-Mike Tricker

8

Like it lots. lead in to chorus a bit contrived in places...

91-Christina

7

Here is a very catchy beat and melody with simple yet effective instrumentation that works quite well to showcase nice lyrics.

07-Nancy G. Brundrett

8.5

I have listened to quite a lot of your music and I respect
your sound very much. "Someday"....
"Takemine 12 strngs'...yes...great first start to the song. Your vocals are good! The drum enhances the sound....Great lyrics as well.

Thanks for blessing me with your song,

Nancy G

12-Hazelglow

8.5

Everything comes together really well in this song! Good performing, good structure, good interest maintained throughout. The melody sounds just like another song that I know, but I'm sure that's just a co-incidence and you didn't steal it! Anyhoo it's very engaging and catchy.